Q.look at the transitions between paragraphs or between sections. how does he make these transitions? what effect do they have on the forward momentum of the piece?
A. it seems like he is just explaining his job through out the text and giving his reasons why he enjoys it so much, he transitions smoothly there is no point to where you are thrown out of loop from a poor transition. the transitions have a positive effect because the paragraphs are detailed and you have to have good transitions in order to keep the details intact.
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